The Sound of One Hand Slapping

Just as a target is not set up to be missed, so is nothing by nature wrong in this world.

Day Twenty: Untitled

Posted by missed on June 28, 2008

She watches him at the bus stop,

And he doesn’t know her name.

She smiles at him when he looks past her,

And hates herself for trying.

These moments, they won’t stop passing,

Like the busses, day after day.

A player in the oldest story, she

Wishes the bus would take her

Where she really wanted to go:

Across the uncharted seas between

What we are, and what we do.

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We aren’t what we pretend to be until we stop pretending.

 

I missed the post yesterday, that’s two for thirty, but I’m still doing thirty over all. I know it’s a bit of a cheat, but, eh, so sue me.

 

In other news, I sent off my first story a few days ago. I’ll expect the rejection letter in a couple of weeks.

One Response to “Day Twenty: Untitled”

  1. Roux said

    That reminds me a lot about the following poem, by Wendy Cope:

    Bloody men

    bloody men are like bloody buses
    you wait for about a year
    and as soon as one approaches your stop
    two or three others appear.

    you look at them flashing their indicators,
    offering you a ride.
    you’re trying to read the destinations,
    you haven’t much time to decide.

    if you make a mistake, there is no turning back.
    jump off, and you’ll stand there and gaze
    while the cars and the taxis and lorries go by
    and the minutes, the hours, the days.

    ***

    Anyway, good luck with the story.

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